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How much editing is too much?

14 Feb

When you write a book about Chaos, you've gotta expect things to get a little weirdI’ve read some beautiful fantasy stories written in strange ways. I think that if the story is great, readers care less about odd grammar and minor typos.

Surely it’s important have a clear voice, but how long should one spend chasing the lost apostrophes in a 650 page epic fantasy novel? Sometimes you need a stray one to fix a wasnt.

It’s possible to become obsessed with making the perfect product, but the premise and style will make or break a fantasy book (see Great ideas sell fantasy books). I’ve spent months editing a manuscript, used a professional editor and a second proofreader and still ended up with typos. Typos in my own books drive me nuts, yet no readers have commented on them (yet! Go on, there’s one over there… but you won’t find it in the ebook any more).

When I worked on The Riddler’s Gift and Second Sight, I became obsessed with editing because there was a traditional print run involved, so there was no opportunity to change the words after publication. In the brand new world of fantasy ebooks, it makes sense to limit the editing to a good final draft and put it into the market to see if the story itself is attractive enough to justify professional copy-editing.

If it starts selling in significant numbers (thousands), the story earns the budget for some obsessing to make a second edition. For self-published or small independent publications, that may well be the point where it gets snapped up by a large commercial publisher anyway. As errors are discovered, the corrections can be incorporated into updates. This strategy of releasing improved editions is quite normal in non-fiction, but is a fairly new idea for novels.

The flaw in this kind of thinking is that as a writer, I can’t release a new fantasy novel in the first place until it’s as good as I can make it. You will always get my best work because I care too much about the story to let it go to the ball in dirty clothes. But as the price of digital content falls, there is ever greater pressure to leave an inch or two of the ballroom floor unpolished.

What keeps the floor shining is the fact that as more readers and authors switch to digital, the advantage lies with books of high quality: it’s the only way to stand out in a market absolutely flooded with content. Your book has to be exceptional, which means applying higher editorial standards than ever before. High-quality ebooks are produced most efficiently by writers who don’t need editing in the first place.

I think editing fiction as a discrete job will become obsolete as the industry of agents, publishers, distributors and bookstores collapses around a simple business model: Authors – Amazon – Readers. In this chain, the readers will set the standards. Exceed their expectations for a given price, and you can shoot straight to the top. Due to low prices, exceptional ebooks have the potential to be supersellers. The average ebook contains something like middle-grade English and more than a few typos. Writing significantly above that standard will lift you out of the masses, so edit until you really believe your story is perfect.

May the best writer win.

 

Are the best fantasy books like Tolkien’s, or not?

02 Feb

The Lord of the Rings by J.R.R. TolkienThe danger of writing epic fantasy is that anything you write will be compared with Tolkien’s Lord of the Rings. So I thought I’d explain how I tackled this in my new fantasy series.

When I began writing the Tale of the Lifesong, the LOTR movies had not yet appeared, and I hadn’t read the book for more than a decade. ‘There and back again’ had become submerged under many great fantasy books by David Eddings, Stephen Donaldson, Robert Jordan and Robin Hobb: new fantasy written in an appealing modern style. The influence of LOTR was far from my mind.

I like the idea of an old world, mapped out on parchment, stuffed with legends; a place one can have an adventure, possibly find treasure and learn magic. I had this idea before I read Tolkien – as a boy I used to collect maps and go on adventures in the mountains. I was seeking a special treasure, looking for a hidden world, or just enjoying the search. It’s because of that idea that I enjoyed Tolkien’s writing. The idea is fantasy: a world that might be there. Reading about it is the adventure.

However, it is impossible to write epic fantasy without acknowledging the presence of Tolkien. If you’re going to write a new fantasy novel that starts with a map, you have two paths: you can choose to be just like Tolkien, or not at all like Tolkien. To write a book that isn’t like something else works against creativity, as new (forming) ideas are constantly compared to the (formed) masterpiece, and by their insubstantiality, seem inferior. You get a poor kind of mirror-image, written in the negative space that surrounds The Lord of the Rings.

If you try to write just like Tolkien, you get cliché after cliché, because his writing was full of them and now defines the things you can’t use (magic ring, dark lord, orphaned hero, stupid orcs, wise elves, dark riders, ancient language, runes, abandoned underground civilisations, dragons…). Write like Tolkien? Damned if you do; damned if you don’t.

This realisation offered me a sense of freedom: the only sensible response to the paradox was to develop ideas I loved and not worry about Tolkien at all. This left me free to explore the world of myths without debilitating copycat-complex. The funny thing is, as a fantasy author, the further you go down the rabbit hole, the more you begin to encounter the archetypes and ideas that drove the great fantasy stories in the first place. Truly unique ideas that have not already been expressed are very hard to find in that mythic plane of consciousness. Myths, being very old, have been told before. Our bones remember a time when there were dragons.

Is the dragon from a myth, or from imagination?Take the idea of a magical ring, for instance, where all the trouble begins. If you want to contain a magical ability in order to pass it on, you need something you can carry, which could be lost, stolen or coveted. You need a talisman, and none is as simple and elegant as a ring. It is hand-crafted in an almost mystical alchemical process, it is small enough to lose, and the idea of a ring having special power is instantly believable (a wedding ring is more than the metal, there’s the idea that it symbolises some magic, not so?). Magical rings make sense to us, they don’t seem weird.

That’s because the magical ring is not Tolkien’s idea. It goes back beyond the earliest legends. But some critics get as far as the T in Tolkien, and look no further for the source of inspiration, overwhelmed by their amazing powers of deduction. Yes, The Tale of the Lifesong has magic rings, but they are different in important ways.

Tolkien’s ring contained the malice of an evil soul. Tabitha’s ring offers clarity of thought. Tolkien’s ring made the bearer invisible. Tabitha’s ring is only visible to those with talent and has no magical powers beyond being a catalyst. Tolkien’s ring was essentially evil and never changes. Tabitha’s ring is neither good nor evil, it just offers enlightenment. Tolkien’s ring-bearer is on the run to destroy the ring. Tabitha is on the run to understand it. Tolkien’s wizard wore a pointy hat. Tabitha’s wizard has a flat-topped one.

Do you see how futile it is to make comparisons? It’s like Tolkien, but not like Tolkien. One reviewer recently pointed up all the moments when a character in The Riddler’s Gift seemed similar to another in LOTR. Of course they do: at some level all characters share an archetype, so do people, and stories. You can’t write sword and sorcery novels without, um, a sorcerer and ah, a sword-wielder. Another critic complained that Tolkien stalked every page. No doubt he could find echoes of Tolkien in any fantasy. Or, if Tolkienism was absent, decry the paucity of invention by comparison. Cynics try to find faults, and become so absorbed in comparing details they can’t enjoy the mood, atmosphere and world of the story.

Stories should never be read in terms of other stories: they must be read on their own terms. At the heart of what makes a great fantasy novel is a reader who wants to be spellbound. Library Girl Reads recently reviewed the same book and wrote, “Wonderfully crafted”; Mary on Goodreads said, “Full of everything you want in a book. Perfect!” Same story, different readers.

Can you guess who has discovered the secret of reading fantasy? It’s a kind of magic.

 
 

Imagine a world …

17 Dec

Greg Hamerton | fantasy authorEver wondered how fantasy authors put together an imagined world? Some books can transport you to worlds that seem so real you begin to wonder if the author was really there. What makes them so convincing, and how does an author begin to imagine a world that doesn’t exist? I’ve been living in a fantasy world for the past decade and have learned some strange things about fantasy you probably wouldn’t expect.

Magic is a big part of my writing. Don’t get me wrong, I think science is hugely enlightening. Magic fills the spaces we haven’t found ways to explain yet, and so in some ways magic is very high tech – it describes the talents we might yet discover but don’t know how to access yet. If you’re happy to accept the idea that we don’t know everything yet, there’s a gap for new possibilities and latent talents that could be developed into magic. Once you have magic in your world, it can be great fun! Magic continues to surprise me. It’s very very tricky to work with, because once you allow people to have magical powers, you realise they would use magic to find simpler solutions to just about every challenge they face.

Take teleportation, for example. If you really had this power, you could steal anything, escape from any jail, avoid bullets, travel through the entire universe. There’s not much that could compel you to be in a predicament. Most tension results from not being where you need to be, or not being able to escape. But of course with great power comes great responsibility. If you could do something to stop Hitler, you’d have to do something about it, or live with being an apathetic moron. Teleport in: pull the trigger: teleport out. Great, now you’re a murderer. See how the world has suddenly become so very intense? So as soon as you introduce magic, your whole world and the way you would respond to it changes. This makes the story interesting in unexpected ways, and plays absolute havoc with any kind of plot you invent before you begin telling the story.

Imagine you decided you would have a knight rescue a fair princess trapped in a tower. Then you decide to give your princess the smallest whiff of magical power. By the time your knight in shining has put on all that armour, found his belligerent stallion and completed his quest against the unfair advantages of all his adversaries (who can use magic against him), the princess would have charmed the guard, escaped from her tower, charmed a trader to hide her in his wagon, charmed some men out of their money, charmed some more men to fight for her, swept down from the hills and captured her captors, and locked them in the tower. And she probably thinks the knight is a bit of a ninny. The original plot disappears in a puff of magic.

At which point you realise you have to throw out any preconceptions and submerge yourself in the imagined world, to be true to the story of a mage you must become a mage in that world, to understand how a mage would act you must imagine yourself there, in the flesh, or it’s just not going to be real enough.

To keep track of all the various characters in my books is easy, because it becomes an act of seeing rather than inventing. I see the strangest characters in this hidden world, and I aim to record them as vividly as possible. This helps to differentiate them in my mind. I write in a slightly different style depending on whose eyes I am looking through, so my vocabulary, mindset and pacing will change automatically, but the more committed I am to the ‘imagined world’ the easier it becomes. What’s most important is not to focus on the voice but to keep aiming to tell the story. Occasionally I write something from a narrator’s point of view to foreshadow an event, create atmosphere, or evoke the rhythms of a myth, and that requires the perspective of an observer, but even then it’s the voice of a character who lives in the imagined world … my alter ego, my double, the fantasy author.

We share a mind, but we live different lives. In the real world, I have a house, a car and a business, and probably spend too much time writing about fantasy writing. In the hidden world, I don’t have a name, but I am very much alive. I see wonderful things. I work magic. I write.

So you could say that by writing fantasy I’ve developed a split personality. Greg Hamerton | fantasy author. There’s a dividing line between fantasy and reality that helps to keep half of me sane, the half that needs a name. The other half is a wild-eyed creative. The ultimate achievement is to blur the line and be able to bring the magic back into this world.

 

Great ideas sell fantasy books (in under 10 seconds)

15 Oct

Blink by Malcolm GladwellAs a fantasy author, I’m always intrigued by what makes people buy a book. I observed my buying behaviour in the bookstore this week. Although I was keen to buy a new fantasy novel, I browsed the front-of-store promotion table and ended up buying a short non-fiction book.

That’s when I realised a simple truth: as an author, you’re selling an idea. It’s not the flow of the prose, the colour of the characters, the world-building and dialogue, the placing of the comma and the fine details of grammar (which can be agonised about for days and days). It’s simple. What is the book about? Is that an exciting idea? You can write it any way you wish.

The concept sells the book; the cover must support the style; the blurb must present the idea. Within ten seconds I’ve decided if I’ll buy the book or not. I might analyse or rationalise for a while longer, but the buying decision was made intuitively, right in the beginning, because book buying is a snap decision.

This is borne out by the book I bought: Blink by Malcolm Gladwell.
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Is young adult fiction a fantasy?

26 Sep

Young adult author Greg Hamerton is revealedAlthough I am thirty-seven, I know what it is like to be a young adult. Not because I was one, but because I am one. Here’s the thing – Richard Bach says it best: “Get this in mind early: We never grow up.”

Although a bunch of things have happened, dreams have flashed by and led me up bright peaks and into dark valleys, I still see the ‘world out there’ in the same way, I see ‘myself in here’ the same way. I’ve learned some tools, made some mistakes, changed my plans and interests, for sure, but I am still very much the same ‘me’ I remember, looking out of the window of my soul, age 13.

That is, apparently, the age at which one begins to enter the ‘young adult’ category within fiction, which has been invented to avoid turning away readers by calling the books ‘teenage fiction’. You’ve got to wonder, if booksellers know that you don’t want to read ‘teenage’ books, should anyone be trying to write them? Because you see, you go from ‘being a teenager’ to ‘being a young adult’ in a flash of an eye, and part of that maturing process is through reading, considering how you’d respond to the challenges in the story, and defining your own character. So to become an adult, you need to read adult fiction, or rather, stories.

A large proportion of ‘young adult fiction’ is fantasy fiction: paranormal romance, supernatural thriller, magical series, myths and monsters. Why? Because it’s exciting, and imaginative, and bursting with possibility. Anything can happen in a these vast new worlds, and this matches your optimism about what might become of you and your life. Great things await just around the corner, challenges have cosmic importance; you are vital and alive.

For some of us, that doesn’t change … or we don’t want it to … and so fantasy is our kind of fiction. We give our writers permission to bring back dreams and visions unaltered by the mundane reality that we seem to live in. Some writers can cleverly weave their tales into the fabric of our modern world, so we can share in the wonder of the possible worlds beyond, or gain some glimpse of the magic that lies beneath our fingers. This doesn’t make fantasy ‘young adult’ reading; it’s merely a category of story.

Categories may be helpful to know where to put the book in the bookstore, but they are also harmful if we use them to generalise. If you read one bad horror book and decide to avoid the genre, you’ll miss all the mastery of Stephen King. If you judge fantasy on the basis of one pile of dungeonpulp you’ll miss the wonder of Hobb, Donaldson, and a hundred others. Slapping ‘young adult’ on a book doesn’t tell me anything, apart from the fact that it probably doesn’t contain graphic sex, psychopathic gore or the glorification of drugs and violence. My novels are likely to always be suitable for young adults, just as they are suitable for old adults. The ‘adult’ elements are often better told through subtle storytelling anyway. Good stories speak to the soul.

 

Author interview in The Star

03 Sep

The Star: Fantasy author interviewOne of the joys of being a fantasy author is being interviewed about writing fantasy (which is, after all, my favourite subject). Nerine Dorman interviewed me for The Star (part of the Independent News and Media group in South Africa). We talked about Ametheus, my relationship with Twardy Zarost and Tabitha’s inspiring nature, as well as my favourite scenes and sources of inspiration.

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Enter South African fantasy author’s world of music and magic.

 

In conversation with Fantasy Book Review

19 Aug

A few years ago, Lee at Fantasy Book Review set out on a quest to find the top 100 fantasy books of all time. In a unique approach, the books are rated between 0.0 and 10.0 which offers a much more precise appraisal than the usual 5 star scale. This allows for an interesting ranking system which is enriched as more books are added. At the moment the book count is around the 250 mark. The Riddler’s Gift was reviewed in 2008 and has held its own on the chart amongst books by David Gemmell, Stephen King and Juliet Marillier. Lee’s review of Second Sight is imminent.

The website is dedicated to reading and reviewing the very best fantasy books for children and adults (both young and old). Featuring interviews, the latest fantasy news, audio-book reviews and competitions Lee provides fantasy fans around the world with a useful, interesting and informative guide to the genre. We chatted about plotting, designing, flying … and madness.

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FBR: You have an alter-ego as a paragliding instructor. Do the extreme sports influence your fantasy writing?

Well of course! Paragliding is full of maps and quests. We fly off to strange lands (sometimes that’s Essex). The perspective I get from flying helps me to view the world with some detachment, which leads to ideas of the rise and fall of civilisations, and the passage of great spans of time. The air is a beautiful realm and that stimulates a lot of creativity. There are also more obvious influences: in the Lifesong you’ll find descriptions of the wind whistling under the wings of the dragon, of riding a gyphon, of being snatched up by a winged demon, and a wizard who likes base-jumping. I also studied marshal arts for many years – I use that knowledge to understand how my characters survive in a fight. An appreciation of risk and how one can feel alive in the face of fear drive my action scenes. Years of surfing taught me to find the calm place at the centre of power; the balance point. All this goes into my writing … or at least, I understand these things and so they shape the story as it emerges.

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A masterpiece of fantasy

12 Aug

Memory and Dream by Charles de Lint - a masterwork of fantasy writingMemory and Dream by Charles de Lint

This story had a deep impact on me. It opens with an innocent sketch in a town square; it soon becomes a deeply engaging study of the act of creation and the mind of an artist.

If I took out my editor’s pencil, I’d only be able to mark one paragraph in the entire book, where a minor character is granted a bit too much page space to rant about his over-intellectualised opinions of art. It is in character though. And that’s it. The single tiny flaw I was aware of, if flaw it is. I mention it only to show that I attempted to be critical, but could not really find fault. The story is mostly flawless, and breathtaking.

There is a twist that throws a new light on the whole story, right at the end, which as a reader is an absolute delight. As my mind recapitulates the tale I get a new version and insight into what I’ve already learned. This is so satisfying, it’s as if I get two stories for the price of one, this deepening of the experience is something I intend to incorporate into my own writing. I shall read more of Charles de Lint’s work. He is a master of his art. He deserves study. Maybe, even, demands it.

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Developing creative consciousness for fantasy writing

25 Jul

Reading fantasy fiction allows us to dream in a very vivid way. Writing fantasy fiction takes the dreaming to another level. You are the dreamer who leads the dream, the creator of the dreamworld. It is the most powerful kind of meditation, an experience of controlled psychosis that results in a prolonged experience of altered consciousness. In this article I will examine ways in which you can induce the receptive state, how you can deepen the intensity of the dream, and how to hold onto the vision for a more profound writing experience.

1. Hearing the music of the mind
Consider music. It is a patterned structure of sounds which you follow in your mind. You find pleasure and enlightenment by following the composer’s creation. The further the musical piece takes you outside of your body, beyond the mundane world, the greater the enjoyment. A masterpiece lingers in your mind leaving you with an altered sense of reality, if only for a while. You believe wonderful things are possible. You are inspired.

Fiction is very similar. Critics who insist on moral instruction, political messages or historical fact miss the musical aspect of writing altogether. A novel is a composition, a concert of ideas, a melody of story played within an orchestra of dreams. It is woven in a particular way by the author to bring about the mental crescendo and ecstacy. Some scornfully label it escapism, as if that means it is less worthy of literary merit than a stuffy book of factual realistic torment. I see escapism differently. If a book is capable of transporting me to escape my reality, then it is a mighty success. In a good novel you get to experience things beyond your world and in some delightful way your power of imagination can be challenged, you can be gripped by raw emotion, and you can find release.

As a writer, the deeper you can sink into the dream you are creating, the more powerfully this music of the mind comes through. Listening for it often means forgetting what you are trying to write (the plot) and to become swept away by the visions (the passion).

As you try to record your visions, you can enhance this receptive mental state by following the principles mentioned below.

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Wicked fantasy author interview

25 Jul

This interview was conducted in June 2007 by Something Wicked Magazine, when Viane Venter talked to Greg Hamerton about The Riddler’s Gift.

The average South African ‘best-seller’ comes in at just 4000 copies, and with writers typically seeing less than 10% of the returns, it’s anything but a get-rich-quick profession. In a market of ‘serious’ and ‘worthy’  novels, fantasy fiction is an even tougher nut to crack, but there are some hungry young newcomers who plan to do just that.

Greg Hamerton is the author of Beyond The Invisible and a guidebook for Paragliding South Africa. This year sees Greg’s fantasy debut with the release of the first tale in the Lifesong series, The Riddler’s Gift.

How did you become a writer?

Writing didn’t even feature on the radar when I was at school. It was never presented as a possible occupation. I did a B.Com to do the whole ‘go out and get a sensible job’ thing, which helped quite a lot in fact. It hadn’t entered my consciousness to become a novelist. I eased into writing with magazine articles on extreme sports and once published, I started enjoying seeing my own words in print. I progressed to Beyond The Invisible, which is half autobiography and half fiction. It was a natural first step to draw on my own experience. Writing is a merciless profession to go into though – that’s probably why they didn’t tell me about it at school, and writing non-fiction now seems like a school project by comparison to a novel. It’s also a lot easier to sell, because it’s specialist information that people attach a value to. Fiction is a really tough market to crack until you move into the tens of thousands.

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